Hi,
to the breakpoints that doesn't break in sice, which system you use? If it is XP, it is known problem which has been discussed many times on woodmanns forum.
One question concerning your post, what aplication nags "the injected code is not responding" olly or that app?
Also try to look to binaries of your program and search for that "The trial period has ended. You have no more uses left.". If you won't find it plain, try also unicode. This could narrow your search; also instead of setting classical breakpoint try memory breakpoint (on read) on the api adress in import table.
Hope it helps.
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