I am only talking about running it in Olly now, works fine outside of Olly:

Call at:

005807AA . E8 A9DAF3FF CALL SystemCl.004BE258

Leads to:

004BE258 /$ 53 PUSH EBX
004BE259 |. 8BD8 MOV EBX,EAX
004BE25B |. 8BC3 MOV EAX,EBX
004BE25D |. 8B15 54515800 MOV EDX,DWORD PTR DS:[585154]
004BE263 |. E8 5C70F4FF CALL SystemCl.004052C4

Leads to:

004052C4 $ 31C9 XOR ECX,ECX
004052C6 . 85D2 TEST EDX,EDX
004052C8 . 74 21 JE SHORT SystemCl.004052EB
004052CA . 52 PUSH EDX
004052CB > 3A0A CMP CL,BYTE PTR DS:[EDX]

There are tons of calls to 004052C4, which then lead you to this access violation, nopping the call at 005807AA didn't help it to run in Olly, nopping the call to 004052C4 helps it run for a bit longer, the trial screen comes up, but keeps dissapearing because of access violations.
I haven't hit that code 411 error message yet, guess I haven't run the program long enough.