Still need help with Asprotect

OKay Satyric0n, when I make the changes you suggest, I not only get the file corrupted message, but it comes up several times after I press ok on it, I cant think what I might have done wrong in the dumping process though, I thought I had done that bit just fine, so I guess I am screwed.
I have read your tut, but I will re-read it, but my code looks vastly different to what TweakRAM did, as illustrated in my last post, this isn't just a case of changing 4 conditional jumps to jumps.